Rhetorical Situation
"Where Sweatshops are a Dream"
is an essay written by Nicholas D. Kristof with the purpose of enlightening
people across the nation that sweatshops are an essential to any developing
country. Kristof's background helps support his argument with his many years of
experience of living in Asia, mentioned in his article.
This article was
directly applied to an audience that has narrow view of that sweatshops equal
unfair pay and unfair treatment, but Kristof's article helps explains to his
audience that sweatshops are an extremely safe and productive job to families
in developing countries. The writer attempts to persuade the audience to
encourage more sweatshops to be built in 3rd world countries. Kristof uses a
balance amount of pathos and ethos by adding stories of injured children and
the improvements of countries' economy with the installation of sweatshops.
Kristof wrote this
article to help inform people, that believe that sweatshops are only a negative
attribute in developing countries, to realize that sweatshops has many
beneficial benefits. The writer knew that many individuals believe that
sweatshops should be banned or stopped, but still wrote this article to attempt
and change these people's minds.
The context of the
article would be that many people presume that many sweatshops is a sign of a
stigma because of many companies create cheap sweatshops and hire cheap workers
to increase their profits.


Logos: In the article "Where Sweatshops are a Dream",
Kristof demonstrates his logic of the current situation by explaining that many
citizens of these developing countries are struggling of obtaining jobs to
provide for themselves and/or families. Many arguments against sweatshops are
that labor standards can improve wages and working condition, but it only has a
larger impact on productions costs that companies are trying to pare. The
better method of setting up sweatshops is to operate nations that has
capital-intensive factories.
Pathos: Throughout the article, Kristof presents many stories of
children scavenging in filth to help provide for their families are often
killed or gravely injured. Kristof uses these events to create sympathy for his
cause; many of these children rather be working in factories because it
provides a safe environment for children to work in.
Ethos: The author displays his credibility
by briefly mentioning that he has lived in Asia for a few years to witness
several of the hardships of the citizens to obtain jobs. By acknowledging the
readers of his firsthand experience with local families searching for jobs, it
helps establish Kristof's credibility.
Rhetorical
Strategies: Kristof organized his article by
introducing an image of Dante-like hell with mountains of garbage with children
searching for old plastic items to sell to recyclers, and transitions into
stating that many families live in this trash area. Then Kristof gives the
audience a surprise that increasing sweatshops can help reduce this type of
lifestyle. The article then presents quotes from people who live these areas
that explains that working in sweatshops is a dream of their because it would
bring in a steady source of income for their family.
After sharing
quotes of the families that are living there, Kristof continues that children
often scavenge for anything recyclable, but these children have a risk for
being killed or injured. This aids Kristof views of sweatshops and allows the
readers to be more aware of the dangerous condition of not having a job in a
factory.
Kristof then
transitions into countering labor standards about how they only are helpful for
a few countries, but having sweatshops be created in more capital-intensive
countries will help those countries tremendously. He then ends his article of a
little girl wearing scandalous brand shirt covered in filth searching for trash
with her little sister with a missing hand when she was hit by a truck.
"Where Sweatshops are a Dream" demonstrates the dangers
of not working in a sweatshop, but also sweatshops can help a country's economy
because it will be providing more jobs. Kristof presents many facts and
emotional stories of children, which are very well constructed to persuade many
readers to consider sweatshops differently. But one flaw of the article was
that it lacked credibility because Kristof mentions only once that he was in
Asia for years, but all these facts could be theorized by him and many of his
stories seem very generic, and all the same: the stories had variety in them,
but overall the article was well structure and very persuasive.
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